Tonight the magic captured a rich picture..
Oh..most wonderful one..
I felt very beautiful myself
with deepening flushed face
an expression on anxious admiration.
I found a jewel on my path,
worth as simple as love in me..
Eh..Iam blessed
Life is wonderful
I give a good deal to my dreams
Oh..I have a good deal to thank you...!
I am little bit doubtful about my caliber to comment on this work.
ReplyDeleteHere I read the spontaneous overflow of loneliness and suppression. I felt a unique rhythm of mind in tunes with beauty, admiration, love and dreams. And I saw a hurt soul which redeems on the jewel of love.
An admirable piece of good versification
sobbing of a hurt soul..!!
ReplyDeleteLife is wonderful....
ReplyDeleteI felt very beautiful myself....
YOU ARE GREAT ...KEEP IT UP...